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托福写作常见病句分析(二)

发布时间: 2014-12-25   来源:查字典高考网

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

16. Insgroupsto suit the needs of enteringsintoswork, students must grasp some technical skills.

改进: Insgroupsto meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

19. They cannot think clearly.

改进: They cannot think straight.

20. Money can improve their living standard.

改进: Money can improve their life.

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